This is a nice way to test the Tyranobuilder, and I think I didn't find any bugs (except there is no option to return to the homepage, which I thought that was intentional). The writing has a nice poetic premise but unfortunately the deliverance seems a bit off because of some typos and grammar mistakes; in which there is not enough distinction (at least adverb of time) to indicate if the story tell in the Past or Present)
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The concept is not bad, but you need to choose (or work) on a better soundtrack. Music is everything (also visualization).
This is a nice way to test the Tyranobuilder, and I think I didn't find any bugs (except there is no option to return to the homepage, which I thought that was intentional). The writing has a nice poetic premise but unfortunately the deliverance seems a bit off because of some typos and grammar mistakes; in which there is not enough distinction (at least adverb of time) to indicate if the story tell in the Past or Present)
Keep up the idea and passion of writing ^^